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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
I can't read the phone number... LOL j/k they look good!
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Originally Posted by Nicholas@Autowerx
I can't read the phone number... LOL j/k they look good!
Haha, thanks man!
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Originally Posted by Colinpd137
Hate it.
Cars (plural) Trucks (plural) Suv (singular)
Interior Deep Cleaning sounds better, I don't think clay bar should be paired with sealant... actually I hate the dual column setup, I think it's the spacing between the two. I feel there is too much space. Also engine bay just feels vague...
Please forgive the crudeness of my example,
Cars, Trucks & Suvs
Interior & Exterior Treatment
Full range of services
Including but not limited to:
Hand Wash & Wax.....................Interior Deep Cleaning
Paint Decontamination................Engine Bay Cleaning
Sealant Application......................Full Paint Correction
& More!
The dots are just there for spacing.
Also,
Call/Text for more info
or to make an appointment!
I like the idea of the mustang and the stripes, but I'm not a fan of how they run vertical, then abruptly change direction, yet the car isn't aligned with either axis... To be fair I have a wicked headache at the moment (it's also three hours past my bed time) and that could be the real reason for my dislike of the stripes, or it's the clash between Y and Z axis while the car is tilted forward throws off the perspective... Either way you should probably just ignore me on that area.
Now having said all that, your card is better then most business cards I have received and you're off to a pretty damn good start.
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Originally Posted by Drunken Yak inc
Hate it.
Cars (plural) Trucks (plural) Suv (singular)
Interior Deep Cleaning sounds better, I don't think clay bar should be paired with sealant... actually I hate the dual column setup, I think it's the spacing between the two. I feel there is too much space. Also engine bay just feels vague...
Please forgive the crudeness of my example,
Cars, Trucks & Suvs
Interior & Exterior Treatment
Full range of services
Including but not limited to:
Hand Wash & Wax.....................Interior Deep Cleaning
Paint Decontamination................Engine Bay Cleaning
Sealant Application......................Full Paint Correction
& More!
The dots are just there for spacing.
Also,
Call/Text for more info
or to make an appointment!
I like the idea of the mustang and the stripes, but I'm not a fan of how they run vertical, then abruptly change direction, yet the car isn't aligned with either axis... To be fair I have a wicked headache at the moment (it's also three hours past my bed time) and that could be the real reason for my dislike of the stripes, or it's the clash between Y and Z axis while the car is tilted forward throws off the perspective... Either way you should probably just ignore me on that area.
Now having said all that, your card is better then most business cards I have received and you're off to a pretty damn good start.
Very good constructive criticism, thanks for taking the time to write all that down and give your input! I only ordered 250 cards cause I know i'm going to change it up in the future once these are all but gone.
Now Take some Tylenol and get some rest! Again thank you
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
I would recommend loosing the @yahoo.com e-mail address. For a small fee through Gmail, you can setup an address with your business name in it.
For example: info@colinsauto.com
This makes for a more professional impression.
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Originally Posted by krisgel100
I would recommend loosing the @yahoo.com e-mail address. For a small fee through Gmail, you can setup an address with your business name in it.
For example: info@colinsauto.com
This makes for a more professional impression.
Good advice!
I like the mustang layout along with the 3D impression the stripes give (obviously cause I have one) but I would suggestion the same as above with the text.
2003 10th Anniversary Torch Red Cobra
Build# 1689 of 2003
[SIGPIC][/SIGPIC]
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Originally Posted by krisgel100
I would recommend loosing the @yahoo.com e-mail address. For a small fee through Gmail, you can setup an address with your business name in it.
For example: info@colinsauto.com
This makes for a more professional impression.
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
Also SUV is an acronym, not a word. All three letters are capitalized.
Or solve all problems: "Sport Utility Vehicles"
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Re: My Business card (criticism?)
The phrasing could be improved slightly, but you biggest improvement is to get a custom e-mail address. Makes you look like someone who really cares.
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