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Constructive feedback on landing page
Hello people,
I'm not a web designer but I have spent most of the day trying to nock up a landing page for my website that I plan to use along with adwords.
So I'm after some constructive feedback on my efforts please as it looks OK to me, however thats because I spent all day at it - Passion Detailing - detailing services get in touch for a free quote
Thanks,
Mark.
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Re: Constructive feedback on landing page
Happy to take a peek, as I would ask the same of people when I'm ready to do so.
Looks better than what I expected from your lead in. I only viewed in Mobile on an s4 and no issues.
Looks good quality.
I thought the header seemed plain in contrast to when you start scrolling down. Need something to fill that white space.....could red circles ...just something.
Then in scrolling down I found more education before I found what you do. I think you should flip that. Most people want to see packages etc first then you an have the education links below.
Just my opinion. Good job
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Re: Constructive feedback on landing page
Cheers dude, I'll get back to it on Monday... Shift work calls!
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