My latest Business card (what do you think?)

[tuscarora dave]

[Kaban]

I like it alot.

The only thing that wouldn't be clear to me if I got one of your cards without knowing anything about your business is whether you're a detail shop, or a place that does a little bit of everything. Specifically the terms "personalized service" and "mechanical repairs" kind of throw it off for me, especially since your company only has "Auto Detailing" in the name and no mention of other services.

[rider9195]

I like it Dave. Especially the discount on the back. Very smart idea! A little color for the font would be nice, but the card is simple and to the point. Nothing wrong with that.

[bl3ujay07]

I like! I hate the super fancy business cards that a lot of auto related shops have. Simple, plain, and non cluster phobic.

[Rix6]

Yup, classy, informative yet to the point without information overload. It's great! Awesome Dave!

-Rick

[Chris H]

It looks great, simple and to the point. I do not want to be extremely picky (my family runs a printing brokerage business and I help out with checking proofs for errors when I can). The only thing I noticed was that the "s" in service in "Personalized service" is not capitalized whereas in "Mobile Service" it is. Hope this helps!

[oneill24]

Also don't mean to be picky but you forgot to place a common after Etters which I'm assuming is the city.

[SRTSean]

Email contact? Some people are weird about having to call on the phone these days.

[Kris R]

Someone mentioned earlier about to fancy equals clutter. Having been a pre press graphic artist and type setter for 6 years at a big print shop, I'd like to say that design doesn't have to look like a box of crayons barfed and exploded on your card. A few simple font changes and a bit of. Olof would be simple enough to look professional without looking too plain and "back yard." I'd be happy to help if you need. Pm me.

[tuscarora dave]

It looks great, simple and to the point. I do not want to be extremely picky (my family runs a printing brokerage business and I help out with checking proofs for errors when I can). The only thing I noticed was that the "s" in service in "Personalized service" is not capitalized whereas in "Mobile Service" it is. Hope this helps!

Helps a lot, thanks. I lost all my old designs when a virus took over my old computer and just loaded an office suite to start making new cards and brochures. This is just the rough draft so picking out the typos is what I am looking for. I also want to play around with straightening up some of the spacing on it.

Also don't mean to be picky but you forgot to place a common after Etters which I'm assuming is the city.

Thanks, I'll be sure to fix that up.

Email contact? Some people are weird about having to call on the phone these days.

I just now got done setting ud a new email client so the dave@tdmad.com will be going on it for sure. I only printed a page worth of cards till I got everything adjusted.

Someone mentioned earlier about to fancy equals clutter. Having been a pre press graphic artist and type setter for 6 years at a big print shop, I'd like to say that design doesn't have to look like a box of crayons barfed and exploded on your card. A few simple font changes and a bit of. Olof would be simple enough to look professional without looking too plain and "back yard." I'd be happy to help if you need. Pm me.

Thanks Kris.

Yup, classy, informative yet to the point without information overload. It's great! Awesome Dave!

-Rick

Thanks Rick.

I like! I hate the super fancy business cards that a lot of auto related shops have. Simple, plain, and non cluster phobic.

Thanks

I like it Dave. Especially the discount on the back. Very smart idea! A little color for the font would be nice, but the card is simple and to the point. Nothing wrong with that.

I thought the discount thing was pretty smart too. Thanks

I like it alot.

The only thing that wouldn't be clear to me if I got one of your cards without knowing anything about your business is whether you're a detail shop, or a place that does a little bit of everything. Specifically the terms "personalized service" and "mechanical repairs" kind of throw it off for me, especially since your company only has "Auto Detailing" in the name and no mention of other services.

Thanks. The folks that will be handed these cards will likely get them from my customers or directly from me after I explain to them what I do. Word of mouth stuff you know.