New engine detail video

**Calendyr** · 01-22-2018, 09:13 PM

Hey everyone,

I just completed my video for my engine detailing service.

Let me know what you think.

https://youtu.be/VrMYVg_Fk94

**luvmyrv** · 01-22-2018, 11:15 PM

Honestly??? Well since your asking....I couldn't finish it. Unbelievably annoying voice, sounds like a robot. And the music isn't great either. Would do nothing to encourage me to seek your services....sorry...you asked.

**wing commander** · 01-23-2018, 01:04 AM

Well I thought it was well made and very compelling. You did a great job.

**Eldorado2k** · 01-23-2018, 01:26 AM

I thought it was pretty good overall, especially once I found out that it was an actual womans voice and not a robot. [I hate videos narrated by robots]

1 thing that I would consider adding would be a visual graphic to accompany her key benefits to getting the engine detailed.

For example: When she says “A clean engine is a pleasure to work on”... Have those words appear on the screen preceded by “1.”

And on her next point, display “2. Shows pride of ownership”

“3. Mechanics take notice of a clean engine and will be more careful/do a better job when working on it”

“4. Adds value if/when you decide to sell the vehicle”

Being able to not only hear but more importantly see and read a list of benefits will stick in viewers heads and give them a simple yet memorable reminder of your services.

Just my 2 cents...

**ChrisT** · 01-23-2018, 01:28 AM

I think it’s very compelling, too. Impressive before and after visuals.

**Daviddear30** · 01-23-2018, 01:38 AM

Wide array of replies so far.

Love the voice. You have a cool accent. Nice before and after transitions.

**Eldorado2k** · 01-23-2018, 01:40 AM

Originally Posted by Daviddear30

Wide array of replies so far.

Love the voice. You have a cool accent. Nice before and after transitions.

It’s not him, it’s a chick. Lol.

**Calendyr** · 01-23-2018, 02:23 AM

Originally Posted by Eldorado2k

I thought it was pretty good overall, especially once I found out that it was an actual womans voice and not a robot. [I hate videos narrated by robots]

1 thing that I would consider adding would be a visual graphic to accompany her key benefits to getting the engine detailed.

For example: When she says “A clean engine is a pleasure to work on”... Have those words appear on the screen preceded by “1.”

And on her next point, display “2. Shows pride of ownership”

“3. Mechanics take notice of a clean engine and will be more careful/do a better job when working on it”

“4. Adds value if/when you decide to sell the vehicle”

Being able to not only hear but more importantly see and read a list of benefits will stick in viewers heads and give them a simple yet memorable reminder of your services.

Just my 2 cents...

Very good idea! I will do so on the next video. Might add it to the french version too since it has not been rendered yet.

Thanks!

**Calendyr** · 01-23-2018, 02:24 AM

Originally Posted by Daviddear30

Wide array of replies so far.

Love the voice. You have a cool accent. Nice before and after transitions.

Ya, it's not me

I hired a professional voice actor for the narration. I thought her voice was pretty neat too. Confused about the first comment, maybe he doesn't like british accents?

**luvmyrv** · 01-23-2018, 11:06 AM

Originally Posted by Calendyr

Ya, it's not me

I hired a professional voice actor for the narration. I thought her voice was pretty neat too. Confused about the first comment, maybe he doesn't like british accents?

Has nothing to do with accent...was more the tone of her voice. But obviously i am in the minority...lol..so I guess you are on the right track...roll with it.