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KMG
10-21-2013, 01:28 PM
Okay guys I just finished my website. Take a look at it and let me know your opinions on it, and where it needs improved.

Feed back please

KMG Detailing (http://www.kmgdetailing.com)

Evan.J
10-21-2013, 01:32 PM
There is a black triangle going through your contact.

You need to get you logo at the top and center.

flhden
10-21-2013, 01:35 PM
Very nice. Did you design it yourself? :dblthumb2:

KMG
10-21-2013, 01:38 PM
I'm not seeing a black triangle at on my screen at all? You don't like the logo offset. I had it centered at first, and preferred the look of it offset to the side.

Yeah I did it by myself using snappages. Took a bit to get used to it, but once your going it is pretty simple.

Evan.J
10-21-2013, 01:40 PM
I'm not seeing a black triangle at on my screen at all? You don't like the logo offset. I had it centered at first, and preferred the look of it offset to the side.


Maybe its this wonderful work computer becuase its not showing any logo.

Pureshine
10-21-2013, 04:31 PM
Looks good and I would center the logo :)

primo spaghetti
10-21-2013, 09:00 PM
very nice and clean...simple.

statusdetailing
10-21-2013, 09:10 PM
I didn't really have time to look at the finer details, but I really like the overall look of your site.

motoo344
10-21-2013, 09:14 PM
Could be personal preference but can you center or left align your links? Your content seems to me left, your logo is centered but the home, about me, etc is all to the right. Maybe its just my browser.

zmcgovern45
10-21-2013, 09:34 PM
You must have based it off a pretty awesome website... looking good :dblthumb2:

I like the color scheme.

Black's Magic
10-21-2013, 09:55 PM
Okay guys I just finished my website. Take a look at it and let me know your opinions on it, and where it needs improved.

Feed back please

KMG Detailing (http://www.kmgdetailing.com)

Looks great. I did ours and it is really cool seeing you're work come together. Plus its more satisfying knowing you didn't have to drop a couple grand to have someone else do it. Still trying to dial in color schemes and layouts. Great job

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CCC4me
10-21-2013, 11:05 PM
I agree--looks good and should bring some business! Did you use a template of some kind?

How critical do you want us to be in our critique? I'm kind of a spelling nazi and I noticed that under the "Packages" heading you used the wrong "your". "Whether your in need... " should read: "Whether you're in need...". There are a couple other minor punctuation style errors, but none as grotesque as that one. Since your business is tending to details, may as well make your business' website detail oriented too!

KMG
10-22-2013, 06:44 AM
Thanks guys. Zach pointed me to the site I used for laying this out and designing.

SnapPages - Create a Website (http://www.snappages.com)

It is pretty simple to use once you get used to it. CCC thanks for pointing that out and feel free to point anything else that jumps out to you. :xyxthumbs:

Black's Magic
10-28-2013, 08:45 PM
Have you thought about signing up for google adsense? If you do, Google will put ads on your site. If people click on the ads, you get paid.
Check out our website if you want. Black's Magic Mobile Detail Home (http://www.blacksmagicdetailing.com). The google ads are the white boxes on each page, we get paid every time somebody clicks on each one of them. Just another way to make some extra money. Just wanted to share the idea

Love's Auto
10-28-2013, 09:11 PM
Nice site! Is your business an LLC? I would include that in your name. Other then that very nice.