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mfrickman
07-09-2013, 06:06 PM
I've been working off of word of mouth and have been extremely happy with the amount of work I've been pulling in.

I feel like having a website would help out even more with getting my product out there. I'm strictly part-time as I'm a full-time firefighter so I've got the idea in the back of my head that I'll book up quick and not be able to handle the work load. (optimistic right? :xyxthumbs: )

I have been working on the website for the past month and I'd like to get some feedback from some of you professionals out there to see what I'm lacking and could do better.

Here's the link: On Scene Detailing (http://www.onscenedetailing.com)

Thanks in advance!

Frick

AutowerxDetailing
07-09-2013, 06:48 PM
It looks pretty great! :xyxthumbs:

Since you asked for some feedback... here is what I got:

- Make your phone number bigger or change the font so it's easier to read.

- I don't like the orange/red/light red color scheme. I can't give you a recommendation lol that's just my personal taste. Take it with a grain of salt.

- About Me Page: Need a better or more high-res pic to showcase your work. Maybe switch the picture of you washing the SUV to the about me page since if someone goes to see an "about me" section they will expect to see a person.

- Services: There needs to be better separation between each package. Customers shopping for a detailer will want to compare pricing and service levels quickly. This is something I struggled with in my site's design and eventually wrapped each service into it's own html table.

- I like your gallery page. I need to figure out how to make some sort of slide show like that!

Best of luck!

Regards,

mfrickman
07-09-2013, 08:08 PM
Thanks, Nicholas.

I use GoDaddy's website builder to get the little image gallery. Turned out pretty good, I think. I'm purchasing a Nikon from a friend of mine so I'm no longer taking pictures with my phone. Not having Hi-res pics really bothers me but it's all I've got to work with.

6supersport7
07-09-2013, 09:30 PM
Not bad, same layout that I used with go daddy as well.

Pureshine
07-09-2013, 11:49 PM
Looks good :)

hernandez.art13
07-10-2013, 05:15 AM
This is what I see using my iPhone. (Just to let you know)

http://i1079.photobucket.com/albums/w506/ScreamKingArt/14B4C072-CFB3-4C26-98B5-83CBE12A7540-1639-0000019C5E86BFF5_zps8502bb11.jpg

If your happy with the look then great for you.

(Good Job)

Art

topshelf1042
07-20-2013, 12:25 AM
Looks good but I did a search for your business on Google and did not find you I am a mobile detailer in Augusta Ga and Columbia SC and my websites rank high in the search rankings. I can get you there with some search engine optimization check out my sites and give me a call.

RLCSEOSERVICE (http://rlcseoservice.weebly.com)

Since I am a auto detailer and realize sometimes advertising budgets are slim plus I'm trying to build my portfolio I could get your site listed on the search engines and drive traffic to your site. Check out the site and ill show you I live it everyday when my phone rings from a potential customer who found us online. $99 to start