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nabisco shine
07-08-2010, 01:25 PM
NABISCO SHINE - home (http://www.jasonsdetailing.weebly.com) tell me what you think and what to improve on thanks

CEE DOG
07-08-2010, 01:33 PM
LoVE the 50/50 on that hyundai!

nabisco shine
07-08-2010, 01:42 PM
thanks cee dog

maximus20895
07-08-2010, 02:19 PM
For some reason in your title tag you have all those spaces. Delete them some at the top it just says Nabisco Shine..don't put -home either..

On your product list, avoid stuff like "This product is really good!" or "this is my favorite" Also try to add commas and capitalize when necessary.

gibbsj87
07-08-2010, 02:33 PM
I am assuming your price is per hour? You may want to list that it's per hour.

You also have inconsistency on the page.

Ex
Full Detail(6-7 hrs)
Exterior Detail (5 to 6 hrs)


why switch from this (to) to this (-)?

Otherwise, not bad.

FinalTouchAuto
07-08-2010, 02:54 PM
I am assuming your price is per hour? You may want to list that it's per hour.


I don't believe it's supposed to be per hour, which leads me to say that he needs to revisit his pricing structure.

ewiesner
07-08-2010, 04:37 PM
Your phone number is missing an area code. I know in Omaha we have an 896 exchange, but it doesn't look like that is where you're located.

Bunky
07-08-2010, 04:41 PM
I don't believe it's supposed to be per hour, which leads me to say that he needs to revisit his pricing structure.

You think $100 is to cheap for a 2-3 step correction?:eek:

Mindflux
07-08-2010, 05:05 PM
You think $100 is to cheap for a 2-3 step correction?:eek:


Yep. That's cheap.

FinalTouchAuto
07-08-2010, 06:30 PM
You think $100 is to cheap for a 2-3 step correction?:eek:

You don't? :bolt:

A 3 step correction (done correctly, as in several hours worth of work) would be 250+ easily.

Bunky
07-09-2010, 05:23 AM
You don't? :bolt:

A 3 step correction (done correctly, as in several hours worth of work) would be 250+ easily.

It sounds sound cheap...I was being sarcastic. I wonder what he net cost per hour is..

FinalTouchAuto
07-09-2010, 05:58 AM
Understood. Sometimes sarcasm is easily lost on the web :)