Constructive feedback on landing page

[barrybudden]

Hello people,

I'm not a web designer but I have spent most of the day trying to nock up a landing page for my website that I plan to use along with adwords.

So I'm after some constructive feedback on my efforts please as it looks OK to me, however thats because I spent all day at it - Passion Detailing - detailing services get in touch for a free quote (http://www.nidetailing.co.uk/carcare/)

Thanks,
Mark.

[TiCaLLioNStaLLyN]

Happy to take a peek, as I would ask the same of people when I'm ready to do so.

Looks better than what I expected from your lead in. I only viewed in Mobile on an s4 and no issues.

Looks good quality.

I thought the header seemed plain in contrast to when you start scrolling down. Need something to fill that white space.....could red circles ...just something.

Then in scrolling down I found more education before I found what you do. I think you should flip that. Most people want to see packages etc first then you an have the education links below.

Just my opinion. Good job

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[barrybudden]

Cheers dude, I'll get back to it on Monday... Shift work calls!